It was too heavy to
be a knife. Definitely too heavy. I could tell by the droplets of sweat the
rolled off his palms, plummeting down to the concrete, slowly melting the
winter ice that had blanketed the pavement. He hid his struggle as he moved
forward, turning back towards me every now and again, a deathly stare in his
eyes. The narrow walls of the pitch black alleyway strangled me as I took
cautious steps, positive that, if I slipped, this would all be over. I had to
keep calm.
They’d caught me. It
was bound to happen sometime, I just wasn’t careful enough. Crowds of them ran
in on me, strict voices bouncing off the walls, too many jumbled words to make
out. I froze as I looked into the barrels of countless guns, positive that this
was my time to die. It was over. I’d tried my hardest – things just hadn’t
worked out.
I wasn’t entirely
sure why I’d been given a second chance; it was almost as if they were letting
me escape. Well, not exactly. No shots were fired, no harsh movements were made
-just one burly man dressed in tight black clothes that did nothing to hide his
intimidating muscles stepped forward, beckoning me towards him. I took a deep
breath and followed, there was nothing more to do. As we were leaving the
building, he picked up a single brown case, shaped very much like an average
kitchen knife. Without a word, he led me down multiple grimy flights of stairs
and out into the chill of the January night.
Despite the negative
temperatures, beads of sweat had begun to form on his forehead now as he used both
hands to carry the case, grunting every couple of minutes. I avoided eye
contact each time he turned back to me, too busy trying to buckle up the
courage to run. I had to escape, this was my chance, this was my moment. It’s now or never, I thought to myself. I
waited until he’d turned to look at me, and then counted down from 14, my lucky
number. If anything, I needed some luck. I whispered the last five numbers,
watching my breath drift off as the night captured it, stealing it away from
me, leaving me to fend for myself. I ducked into the alleyway and froze,
pressing my body up against the wall, using the shadows as shields. There was
just enough time for the man’s grunt to break out once more before a deafening
thud was heard and ice shattered. He’d dropped the case. Hurried footsteps moved
closer towards where I was. I kept my eyes shut tight, relying only on my ears
to save me. As the noises faded, I decided that the man must have run back to
where we’d come from, desperately searching to find me. I didn’t have much
time. I thrust my eyes open and gave them a second to adjust to the darkness. Ready? I asked myself. Ready. I ran.
Wow. I saw your comment on the GTW post today and checked out your blog. Can I just say I love this and the other ones I read?! This is seriously good writing, Alice! Do you just write bits of things like this? Or do you have any novels or other projects in progress? :)
ReplyDeleteWow, thank you so much Amanda... that really means a lot! I have a novella that I have finished, and have been querying different agencies and trying to get it published. Unfortunately, nobody seems to want it:( thank you so much, I really appreciate it!:)
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